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May 18, 2010
An early Immediacy poem…
(take a look at the Immediacy Revolution page for notes on this poem)
Missed Chances
I could have gone to India, but I didn’t have the money,
I could have been an Beekeeper, I don’t care much for honey
I could have been an Astronaut, but there’s no men on the moon,
I could have been a Singer, but I couldn’t hold a tune.
I could have been a Farmer, but it’s cold out on the land,
I could have been a Miner, but I don’t want dirty hands.
I could have been a Hippie, but my flower was all wilted,
I could have been a Bride, but with my luck, I’d be jilted.
I could have been a Dancer, but I’m not light on my feet,
I could have been a Butcher, but I can’t bear to handle meat.
I could have been a Carpenter, but then I lost the nails,
I could have been a Sailor, but there’s no wind in my sails.
I could have been a driver, but I couldn’t pass my test,
I could have been an Insomniac, but I really need my rest.
I could have been a Diver, but I don’t know how to swim,
I could have been an Acrobat, but I’m not too good at Gym.
I could have been a Croupier, but it wasn’t on the cards,
I could have been a Train Driver, but they only wanted guards.
I could have been a Dentist, but I was down in the mouth,
I could have been an Explorer, but I don’t know North from South.
I could have been a Baker, my cakes always burn,
I could have been a Teacher, but I’m far too old to learn.
I could have been a Record Producer, but I haven’t got the hype,
I could have been a Secretary, but I don’t know how to type.
I could have been an Electrician, but it wasn’t in my power,
I could have been a Gardener, but my seeds just wouldn’t flower.
I could have been a Watchmaker, but I never had the time,
So I’ll stick to being a Poet, because I’m not too bad at rhyme!
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Hi Lynette, loving your blog hun.
I love this poem it’s very humourous. I would be keen to take a butchers at the last draft… I know you dont like the term final draft! Great work Lynette on creating your own blog… get you!
Comment by Sara Jane Edmondson — May 25, 2010 @ 10:22 am |
A great write and fantastic rhyming
Comment by Amitava Chakrabarty — May 19, 2010 @ 3:22 am |
Thank you Amitava, have you had a try at raw writing? I’d be interested to see it if you have; especially as I know English isn’t your first language (it is great though, better than some people I know whose first language is English!)
regards
Lynette
Comment by storytellerbard — May 19, 2010 @ 9:59 am |